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Rectified: Shimoneta!

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DAJUM BRAH'S AND BRAHNETTES! Hold your boomin presses and stop the friggin horses, because this is mother effin RECTIFIED! The series I once vaguely mentioned in a journal and am now starting in FULL FORCE! 

In this side-show series, I am on the prowl for TICKLISH INJUSTICE! 

We have all seen them in countless of cartoons, series and movies. Those moments where we have been given the PERFECT setup, the most superbe oppertunity to have ourselves treated to some first class high society big budget tickling, and all for what? To be betrayed! To be confronted with scenes that COMPLETELY miss the point! That fail to deliver! That don't get how tickling works, or not include it AT ALL!
Here, I look for those botched setups! Tickling that could have been but wasn't! Tickling that has been mistreated to INSANE levels! The scenes where we as tickle enthusiasts FACEPALMPrince Charming (Facepalm) - Icon Facepalm [Supernatural] Vampire Facepalm The Michael Rosen facepalm Smg4 Mario Facepalm  the SHITE out of our mugs (here's to hoping that you don't really have that on inside your head) because a part of us dies when we see a knismolagtic setup or scene that fails to do what it was supposed to be doing. 

But look not further, because Bebob is here to correct those mistakes. I will embark on a journey to deliver you pieces that RESTORE the tickling to it's rightful glory! To remedy these shortcomings with drawings that will put the LAUGH back in LAUGHABLE! 

This is Rectified.

Our first customer is a scene from Shimoneta. After a long and exhausting google search of 9 seconds, I found the offending scene and provided it for your viewing discretion; 4fan.tv/v/emp5KJd6

In this scene, Saotome (I belief she is called) is being ''punished'' it seems for slacking off or something. It's all there, tentacles, feathers and feet. Fine, you'd think!

I never even attempted to watch this Anime. It's way to uncomfortable and alien for me personal to enjoy. The concept sounds...interesting at best, but the execution, to me, was cringy and full of missed opprtunity. The one saving grace was that it included a tickling scene, but when I watched it I found that it too ended up like a missed oppertunity. We have an interesting setup, and the reaction is decent, but!

TICKLING A SOCKED FOOT WITH A FEATHER!!!!??!!?!? Pick either socked tickling OR feather tickling my Animating Amigo's, but not both! That just doesn't work!

Offcourse, I have to step in and correct this mistake, and that is why this scene is the first to be RECTIFIED. 

So, what did we change?!

BAREFOOT FUN!(because as some of you might have noticed, I am somewhat of a foot person)
UPPERBODY TICKLING!(you even have her tied up with her arms up!!!)
TENTACLE ATTACK!(If you go through the effort of installing robot tentacles on such a specific location in your pervert-bunker, at least add a few more to help you tickle!)
BETTER BONDAGE!(three little wraps aint gonna cut it. Simple as that!)

So there you have it! I hope you enjoy this first iteration of RECTIFIED, and if you have tips, suggestions or ideas for other scenes that have to be RECTIFIED, let me know.

Stay tuned, enjoy, and until the next time!








And yes, I totally traced her outlines. With paper. From my laptop screen. With a pencil. I regret nothing.
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FeetFiend117's avatar

This scene was so close to being great, I hated that her feet were left socked